IELTS Essay Bank · Task 2 Academic · Opinion (agree/disagree)
Free University Education: Band 8 Sample Essay
317 words · Topic: Education, Government ·
The question
In some countries, students must pay high tuition fees to attend university, while others believe that governments should make higher education free for every qualified student.
To what extent do you agree or disagree that university education should be free for all?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Band 8 sample essay
Highlighted = useful vocabularyWhether a university education should cost students anything at all is one of the more divisive questions in education policy. Although tuition fees are often defended as a fair price for a personal benefit, I agree that higher education should be free for every student who meets the academic entry standard, because the gains to society far exceed the cost to the taxpayer.
The principal reason is that fees ration education by wealth rather than by ability. A gifted eighteen-year-old whose parents cannot contribute faces a stark choice between years of repayments and leaving education for work, and many understandably choose the latter. Every such decision represents untapped potential: a doctor, engineer or teacher that the country has, in effect, declined to train. Abolishing fees removes this financial deterrent and ensures that university places are allocated on merit.
Equally important is the fact that the benefits of a degree are not purely private. Graduates tend to be more productive, rely less on public services and contribute more in income tax, so the state recoups its investment many times over across a working life. The Nordic countries, which fund their universities almost entirely from general taxation, demonstrates that a free system can coexist with strong research output and a highly skilled labour force.
Opponents raise legitimate objections: free tuition is expensive, and it partly subsidises middle-class students who would have enrolled anyway. However, these problems argue for better design rather than for fees. Governments can cap the number of funded places, make continued funding conditional on satisfactory progress, and pair free tuition with maintenance grants targeted at poorer students, so that public money reaches those whose choices it actually changes.
In short, charging tuition treats higher education as a private purchase when it is, to a large extent, a public good. Provided that admission remains competitive, free university is a policy whose returns more than justify its price.
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Why this is Band 8: criterion by criterion
Task Response
Band 8The prompt is fully addressed with a clear, consistent position ("free for every student who meets the academic entry standard"). Ideas are relevant, well extended and supported: the cost of fees is traced to an individual decision and then to a national loss, and the counter-argument is not just acknowledged but answered with concrete policy design. Only a slightly more nuanced treatment of the cost to taxpayers would be needed for Band 9.
Coherence and Cohesion
Band 8Information is sequenced logically and every aspect of cohesion is managed well. Paragraphs open with sentences that grow out of the previous one ("Equally important is the fact that…", "Opponents raise legitimate objections"), and reference chains are precise ("Every such decision", "these problems"). Paragraphing is sufficient and appropriate. It stops short of Band 9 only because the cohesion, while skilful, is occasionally a little signposted.
Lexical Resource
Band 8A wide resource is used fluently and flexibly to convey precise meanings: "ration education by wealth", "financial deterrent", "recoups its investment", "a public good". Less common items are used skilfully and naturally, with the idiomatic "in effect" and "more than justify its price". There are no spelling or word-formation errors, which supports a secure Band 8.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Band 8A wide range of structures is used with flexibility: fronted clauses, participle phrases, a colon to introduce an explanation, and a conditional conclusion ("Provided that admission remains competitive…"). The great majority of sentences are error-free. There is one agreement error — "The Nordic countries … demonstrates" should be demonstrate — which is the kind of very occasional slip Band 8 allows.
Useful vocabulary and collocations
- untapped potential
- ability that exists but has not been developed; ideal for education and employment essays.
- financial deterrent
- something that discourages an action through cost; more precise than problem.
- university places are allocated on merit
- formal passive phrase for fair, ability-based selection.
- recoups its investment
- gets back the money it spent; a sophisticated alternative to gets the money back.
- a highly skilled labour force
- strong collocation for economic arguments.
- cap the number of funded places
- to set an upper limit; shows how a policy can be controlled.
How this essay could reach Band 9
- 1Engage with the strongest version of the opposing view — for example, quantify or seriously weigh the cost to taxpayers who never attend university — before rejecting it; Band 9 responses are fully developed on every side they raise.
- 2Remove the last accuracy slip (the Nordic countries demonstrate); at Band 9 errors occur only as rare "slips".
- 3Let cohesion become almost invisible: fewer explicit signals such as "In short", with ideas connected through reference and sentence structure alone.
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