IELTS Essay Bank · Task 2 Academic · Opinion (agree/disagree)

Free University Education: Band 7 Sample Essay

282 words · Topic: Education, Government ·

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The question

In some countries, students must pay high tuition fees to attend university, while others believe that governments should make higher education free for every qualified student.

To what extent do you agree or disagree that university education should be free for all?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Band 7 sample essay

Highlighted = useful vocabulary

In many countries, the cost of a university degree has risen so sharply that tuition fees now decide who can study, rather than ability alone. While free higher education would place a heavy burden on public finances, I largely agree that it should be available to every qualified student, provided that the system is carefully managed.

The strongest argument for abolishing fees is that it would widen access to education. When students have to pay thousands of dollars a year, many talented young people from low-income families either give up on university or take on large debts which affects their lives for decades. Removing this financial barrier would mean that places are awarded on merit, which is both fairer and more efficient, since the country benefits from developing all of it's talent and not only the talent of wealthy families.

Furthermore, a better-educated population brings long-term economic benefits. Graduates generally earn higher salaries, so over their careers they pay considerably more income tax than non-graduates. In this sense, public spending on tuition is less a cost than an investment. Germany, for example, stopped charging tuition fees at most public universities and still has a highly skilled workforce.

Admittedly, critics argue that free tuition is too costly and may lead to overcrowded universities or to students who do not take their studies serious. These concerns are reasonable, but they can be addressed by setting strict entry requirements and by limiting free places to a first degree completed within a normal time.

In conclusion, although making university free requires substantial public investment, I believe the social and economic benefits are greater than the cost, as long as places are given according to academic ability.

Word count: 282

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Why this is Band 7: criterion by criterion

Task Response

Band 7

All parts of the prompt are addressed and the position — largely in agreement, with a condition — is presented clearly and maintained throughout. Main ideas are extended and supported (access for low-income students, tax returns, the German example), and the counter-argument is answered rather than just mentioned. At times the support over-generalises ("Graduates generally earn higher salaries") without explaining the mechanism in depth, which is the difference between this and Band 8.

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 7

Ideas are logically organised and each paragraph has a clear central topic. A range of cohesive devices is used appropriately ("In this sense", "Admittedly", "These concerns"), and referencing is mostly clear. There is some over-reliance on familiar paragraph openers ("Furthermore", "In conclusion"), but progression is clear throughout — solidly Band 7.

Lexical Resource

Band 7

There is a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision, with good topic collocations such as "widen access", "financial barrier" and "strict entry requirements". The writer shows awareness of style ("less a cost than an investment"). There are occasional errors in word choice and form — "take their studies serious" should be seriously — which keep this at Band 7.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 7

A variety of complex structures is used — concessive clauses, a conditional ("provided that"), non-defining relative clauses and a comparative structure — and most sentences are error-free. There are a few errors: an agreement slip ("debts which affects") and a punctuation error ("it's talent" for its). Good control with a few errors is the Band 7 descriptor.

Useful vocabulary and collocations

widen access
precise collocation for making education available to more people.
take on large debts
natural verb + noun collocation; also take out student loans.
financial barrier
useful for any essay about cost as an obstacle to opportunity.
long-term economic benefits
accurate compound phrase; avoid the common error economical benefits.
a highly skilled workforce
strong, examiner-friendly collocation for work and education topics.
strict entry requirements
shows how a policy can be made conditional or selective.

How this essay could reach Band 8

  1. 1Explain why each point is true rather than asserting it — for example, show how tuition fees change a specific student's decision, and what that costs the economy later.
  2. 2Replace a familiar connector or two with more natural transitions that grow out of the previous sentence ("Equally important is…", "Opponents raise…"), so cohesion feels less signposted.
  3. 3Eliminate the small accuracy slips (its/it's, subject–verb agreement, adjective vs adverb); at Band 8 the majority of sentences must be completely error-free.

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